Hearts Broken Again

by TheRevelation   Dec 8, 2006


Eyes turning red with every word he had said,
Fingers tremble while my heart disassembles,
Burning rage nobody knew what was going on backstage,
Break up with pain this something no one could explain,

Music playing loud as I sat under a storm cloud,
Tears just fall and my heart grew small,
A boy and girl both hearts quickly unfurled,
Guitars and drums banging hearts just hanging,

Hands kept cold without someone else`s to hold,
Gaze is now tears nothing is what it appears,
Relationships end and there is no pretend,
Tears pain and hearts broken will come again,

Now backstage is a crying girl with her stomach a swirl,
Her boyfriend is now gone much pain is what she`s undergone,
She stands up and waits she knows another love is what awaits,
So until then she`ll be prepared for the next time when,
When she gets her heart broken once again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey hun i really appreciate ur comments - u dont know how much. so thanks heaps for them =] this poem was soo good i loved how u structured it. this was my fave line "Hands kept cold without someone else`s to hold" it just sounded so nice n bit sad too. anyway great poem very touching keep em coming =] xx

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A neat rhyme scheme, very original. But I think in your last stanza, the words should be more different than what you had like gone and undergone and waits and awaits...you know? But overall nice job with some good imagery!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Love it sweetums! This is soo good and I love the way you set it up! Love it!
    xoxo