Lol!! Sorry this was kinda sorta maybe funny. Well it was good. I give you that!!! Lol!! I liked it. =] Cinco!

Wow david, that is some deep stuff there! I love the way you write, you are a great writer!!

Ciao♥

Wooow. You dreamt your girlfriend dumped you for another girl!? Haha that's kinda .... cool. But not... hah..
Even though you say it's not that good I liked it all the same. keep writing I have this feeling you have talent. 5/5

Awesome!
Sometimes ur best inspiration comes when u fall alseep.....cuz this sure did.

You never told me bout this

Thats harsh but very well put..strong form exceelent.

lissa

Hahahahaha reminds me of Nathan :p

AMAZING POEM. WELL DONE

Wow... that is a good poem... great job!