I'm normally not a big fan of freestyle poetry but you're choice of words really makes this piece stand out. 5/5 good job!

"you are my one desire,
my warm winter fire."

Such a beautiful ending.
A gorgeous piece with outstanding imagery!
Excellent write
5/5
*Gem*

This is precious. i loved it. makes me think of what I want from someone...hehe. 5/5 good writing.

Beautifully written great job =] keep it up xx