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by Amber Mann   Dec 8, 2006


A slash of silver
a kiss of red
a scream of pain
a moan of pleasure
in and out she slips
and away she drifts
till there is no more
and away to peaceful silence she rests

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  • 19 years ago

    by HalfMoon

    5/5

    It's so simplistic, left open to interpretation. I read over it twice just to try and see what the poem was saying; I wasn't going to comment back something made me come back, the simplicity is very well used. It's captivating.

    Nice work.

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