LOL kind of a funny ending, but a good poem, not your deepest, but a good one. Yes, that one of mine was for an Evanescence contest. You entered too I think. lol It was fun. and thanks for the compliment. I just like rhyming poems, and if I'm at a block mentally, I go to rhymezone.com to help stir up ideas! lol But yours are so good too! Which is why your a fav of mine!
Charisma*

I love this poem a lot i like the flow of it...you really are good :), keep up the good work....5/5

Wow this is like happening to me right now.! crazy stuff

Another beautifull poem, you trully are amazing with your thughts and feeling :)) loved it :))

In that situation right now lol.. wonderfully written, great flow, good choice of words.. exceptional, 5/5

Oh and with my writing i'll write one soon, hit a dead patch at the moment lol

~[AnotherDream]~

Yeah it sucks when u really love someone but they cant seem to understand or acknowlege that your love is real. and pretty soon we have to let go bec holdin on will hurt even worse..love it

Now Mr X has to understand that there are so many guys waiting to say what u want to hear but u only want to hear from Mr X...so he shouldn't make u wait for long... :o)

great write friend

all the best and take care

Nice beat..kinda sad but i mena yea true love will wait but sumtimes it can't...excellent

Such a cute poem hun!!!i can totally relate. if this is about u...hope everything works out!!

~lilia~

Awww thisd poem's really cute i like it a lot. Your pretty good urself

Wow.. thats rllyy good.. its funnyy && sadd at the same time but i love it.. 5/5

Wow..ur telling ur feelings but at the same time reading everyone else's too^^beautiful...

I love it. So, many emotions. great job!
Keep it up! ~samantha~

Omg great poem. great. very touching.

Hey hun ur emotions really show in this poem. very heartfelt poem. good job on it. xx

Very good, i think. but the way you ended it after you had such a meaningful beginning...you kind of made it lost its feeling. 4/5.

Very cute! I loved it and I know how you feel!
xoxo

And about the christmas present, I don't have quite that much money, lol. Can you give me any ideas in what to get him??