I like this poem, is was well thought and so many different pieces going on. The ending was amazing, I loved it all. It is so true what you say and I admire that. keep up this work, I'm gonna read more!

Great job! 5/5! xox ;]

Really very touchy n gr8 poem.....5/5

God bless u

VERY WELL SPOKEN. VERY GOOD POEM

Started with a hope and then a complete journey in the valley of darkness, loved it all the way

all the best and take care

I loved the ending, such a powerful message that so many people need to take heed of before they start moaning about problems.

"I'm writing this poem from my heart.
To me this is my work of art."

I also loved that couplet. An excellent dark piece
5/5
*Gem*

Wow, That was amazing. Really enjoyed reading it. 5/5 :)

A MAZ ING

simply..

i cant believe how true this poem is..even though being a dark one.. it still instills hope ..
the way you expressed it..

Love can heal your wounds,
but the marks on your heart leave a hole.
To pierce all your memories,
To create a carving out of your soul.

.. relates beautifully.. without a doubt.. amazing piece of art.

~Wake~