Awwww.....such a great poem...i no the feeling im sorry people get u down like this u dont deserve it...nobody does just stay strong and hold ur head up high and keep writing

praying 4 u
suzanne

I think this is one of your better poems. You allow the reader to see and feel your agony with your words. I do have an understanding of the type of thing you are going trough but never can I truly feel as you do. You will be ok. Your poetry is helping others to face their grief. I just hope that writing it down is helping you too.

The audience can really see the emotion in this poem, it just leaps off the page...

"I really do want to live, then I wonder why?
The urge is stronger, to just give up and die."

Such powerful words as well really get your point across.
Hang in there.. the only way is up
5/5
*gem*

Aw this was sad. there was a lot of emotion in this one. very well written xx

This was a sad poemm
bahh it was greatttt
niceee

This is such a sad poem. but its really good.
((Kelsey))

I am glad thigns aren't quite so bad anymore. I can't stand it when people hurt you!

So beautifully written...so very sad.
The imagery and wording were great and I thought it flowed well.
Stay strong!

This is really strange as i have just been hurt by a family member who i loved very much and they badly let me down. and the line where it sys...
"I'm not lazy or crazy I have a disease,
This disease is now a part of me."...

i wish people would relaise that and understand that.

im sorry that people have hurt you, people do mess up when they try and help in a situation they dont understand. xxx

keep fighting for me please xxxx