This poem is really sad and deep but yet it gets to the point. Sadly it is true with some men and its a pity. Gret job 5/5

sincerely,
Katlyn

An amazing story. Loved it.
And its true, why do some guys do that, cheat and throw away everything. I especially loved this:
"How was she supposed to know
That he didn't mean forever"
thought that was an excellent way to end it. Brilliant. Defo 5/5.

Kelly
xx

Aw that was really sad. i like poems that have a story to tell. this was a really touching one. anyway keep up the great work. xx

Your poem was very good it was a nice read
amanda

Omg that was sooo goood:):) xoxo

Wow this is a really good poem and i like it alot. that would be horrible for someone to do. this would be one of those poems to make me cry. u know how to write your stuff!! (p.s. thanks for tha comment on mine)

Can you please read my poems and vote on them and possibly leave a coment?

Owie... im so afraid of my girl doing that to me, i dont know who to trust anymore, and i have dreams about that all the time... check out my poems, i think you might like them

Cool

That is really sad! beautifully written but terribly sad! 5/5 please comment back on mine! great job!

~Ashley

Very good job! Great writing!

Wow shocking and this style and beat was new..kinda rapish at times...great twist..awesomely done and very earth shattering..great prose

Aww...this is so sad...

Your poems are really good!! I especially like this one

OH MY GOD! This is an AWESOME Poem! I loved it! Loved it! Loved it! 5/5 frm me!

Damn what a shame, i mean if you have the love of your life, why ruin it on a bachelor party with some stripper you don't know. that's why i am oppose of bachelor parties though i am a guy myself.
i mean yeah it's our last moment of freedom but then again what's better than being with the one you love forever? i would've done anything to fix it though i don't think she'll give me a chance.
-shakes head- still can't believe we guys can be so stupid sometimes. oh well that's life for yall

good poem as usually. keep it up Gem. good luck to you and marcus.
5/5