Are you sending it through UPS or DHL? cause she has not recieved it yet,lol.
truly the best poem I have read by you. You are amazing.

Wow I love your Idea here dude, of how you penned it and how you describe what you feel really amazing
How we wish we can send our hearts lol
very nice and congrates for the awards you should have DCFP platinum awards
5/5 for the poem from your heart

Hello
after so long...finally another poem..u gave birth to enother poem..enother renewal of hope.........when i saw your poem i smiled to my self and thanked you for sharing one more of your gift...
for some reason i don't really underestand this poem...iam sorry...but for once i don't know wat u mean or whom u have writen this poem for...but who ever she is....she is lucky to have ur heart...because u don't give it that easily and second i hope to god she won't break it..........
by the way congradulate on being the winner of this weeks poetry contest...u truely deserve it.....acctully all ur poem deserves to be on the first page....
but iam still confused about this poem...
i don't underestand the messege behind it.....
i would be glad if u would plz explain it a little more..because iam very curious to know..
have a wonderful day and hope to see more poems in near future

Thank you very much as always. and this poem is for whoever take the responsibility for it,lol....
i hope it explained my answer

Were always scared to get our heart rebroken after a lost love, it's always delicate and easy to rebreak. excellent write 5/5

Very good poem. ANother 5/5. I can relate to this poem. If only it was that easy:)

It was good, but it didn't roll right off my tongue. i also think you could use a little more advanced vocabulary, just my opinion. nice job though, i've read some of your other works, i know you're a good writer. 5/5

This is a very good poem, like all your poems, there is not one poem you've written that i havent liked, i give this one a 5/5!!! keep it up

Bryan

Exellent job u wrote this very well i could feel the poem i loved it 5/5

Exellent job u wrote this very well i could feel the poem i loved it 5/5

Great job, good use of advise it, you didnt over do it, it flowed great, and it felt meaningful 5/5

Oh, really, really good. The repetition of 'Advise it...' worked very effectively. Nice job.

Another awsome job goran i totally got what you meant the whole time. I think these are the times when we need a 10 in voting because this one is a 10/10. The poem seems like it means alot to you and i think it really does but anyway good job again.

=D
~King drake

P.S
if you could find the time out of writing awsome poems could you comment some of mine again(if you dont have to if you dont want to) thx

Great poem with great rheme, i love it, but is she going to give you back?
if i was her i wouldnt.

This poem is beautiful! Your rhyming was amazing, and your vocabulary choice... blew me away. I really liked this part:

Advise it, not to live in the world of dreams,
Advise it, to learn how to live without you.

This time I will send you my heart,
Before it dies, advise it good.
Just convince it with some words,
This time, please do not be rude.

Your beat of the poem when you read it was perfectly timed, great job!

Amazing!

5/5

Very sweet...maybe a little on the simple vocab side. Keep it up

Another ah`mazing poem from you . I think it`s one of the best I`ve read . The words you used were simple though, but I love the whole 'Advise it' idea .
Great write .
..__MiNDYY

Wow, wonderful poem. its almost reaching for something it can't have.
I really feel it.
5/5
βlαξκ ♥ hεαrτ

Sorry if I sounded rude on the "Simple" part. Idk, maybe it's just me, you sounded a little upset.

How?