.....and 3 hrs and 45 min later shes ready to come out, but we're already late for the dinner :) i must say not once have i ever been disapointed :))
Another great poem, i'll tell you a secret here, ive fallen in love with your poems :)) 99/5

That was such truth spoken in such simple words. Really great poem, even though apparently you didn't think so, lol ("bleh")...great job!
~Midnight Sun

I did like this one. I've thought of doing one similar. Just haven't actually penned it yet. lol Maybe I will now that I've read this. It had a great ending though! Really a thinker. I don't know what your "bleh" was for! LOL !
Charisma*

I love this! It is soo good and soo true for a lot of girls! Keep it up! I'm adding you to my favs!
xoxo

This is very good!
and true
5/5
xoxo-am

WOW i loved this one hun!
You really have talent at writing poetry
**jealous lol **

Much love
xxBonnie

COOL POEM, VERY COOL.
I DONT WEAR A LOT OF MAKEUP, BUT DONT KNOW IF I WOULD BE SO KEEN TO GO TO WORK WITHOUT A PATCH ON?!?
MAKES YA THINK.

KELLY
XX

Haha! Could this be inspired by a thread? I believe it could.

Very nice, wonderfully penned. Looking forward to reading more of your poems soon. *5/5

I loved the flow and its so true and in reality we all do that sumtiems when we'e hurting we paint on a smile and act as if were okay when we're not...excellent.

Gem I love your writing! You have so much talent! You can tell from your comments and the things you write about, that you have a very careing heart! Excellent job on the poem!

Great Job! 5/5

Makeup it hides ur face but your eyes show the pain of your existance
good job

This is a really gd poem and you write very well but dnt tar every girl that likes to were make-up with the same brush. i put my make-up on coz it make ME feel gd i dnt do it for ne 1 else. mazie X

Cute Poem!

Nice

Omg, I'm sorry! I stole this title from you! I feel so bad!