I really liked this one.
I thought it was really cute and you has a great rhythem!
Excellent!
5/5
*Gem*

Wow, u simply reminded me of those golden days of my life & i wish i could rewind...:o)

beautifully penned

all the best and take care

Awwsome :P

Hah this makes me wanna go and play in my yard like i did when i was little.
i wanna be little again:(
great job i loved it

Great poem!

Pretty good. 4/5

Sounds like the same place I grew up in! Those early memories are the best! Very good piece!

I liked it. very cute..reminded me of my younger siblings...they have 20 acres to run and play on! lol great poem. 5/5

Hey i liked your poem it was good you should read mine (why)

Wow this peom is cute!! Your really good!!! 5/5

Made me feel like i was younger elamentry days:)

Very cute 5/5