I like this poem. short and good. pretty hopeful too in just few sentences, keep it up/...

I like it but its a bit short
but keep up the good writing;)

Nice!! i wish you'd write more... it seems that you have the potential.. :)

Hey girl cant find ur email so...when u can give it to me

Hey girl cant find ur email so...when u can give it to me

Hey girl cant find ur email so...when u can give it to me

Hey girl cant find ur email so...when u can give it to me

Hey girl cant find ur email so...when u can give it to me

Hey joel my email is falloutboy418@hotmail.com so if anyone wants to email me go ahead

This s really good poem. i like the stanzas.
~eve

That was a wonderful poem! i loved the short lines and the message. great poem! 5/5