I'm... stunned. Jeez, I wish I had your talent, dear. You are wonderful. The rhyming seems to easy, so simple for you!
"A flute playing in the wind
ocean mists which stain my skin
seashells shuffle in my pocket
a picture in a golden locket
tears of a lover on christmas morning
young heartache and a companion's mourning"

that part made me want to cry... but I love it :)

Layla, you capture such a milieu of sight, sound, and emotion as this poem aptly displays.Your images are so unique and you have such a strong voice.I love your work, truly one of my favorites on this site.You are a true poet.

GaryJ

Wow, it was amazing, I wish I could write like that, I've never read anything like it, your talent could take you far! I could actually imagine it, I loved it, keep writing!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Impressive and touching imagery.....I really enjoyed the tour......

I love the innocence of your words and how your words are so carefullly picked otu and the emotion that reigns in each of your piece. and each one of them holds there own..its amazing

melissa