Sweetie, you should be proud! This is amazing! I love the format and it was just magnificent! Love it sweetie!
xoxo

Very good. I too thought about attempting this one for the contest!
and lol I know about that line in my new love poem
something like
"I was lost in the crowd,
But your hand guided me out."
I knew that one was just a bit off in the flow, but like you said, don't know anything better. LOL! Same brainwave there!
Good job on this b/c it's hard, but honestly, I don't like this type of poem. It's so repetitive and doesn't seem to make much sense. You know?
Charisma*

It is certainly an accomplishment to write a paradelle, a very beautiful one at that.

I became facinated with different poetical forms a few years back. Tis a tiresome and frustrating thing, but the rewards are great.

Wow, beautiful and complex. Very nice.

Hey this is really good you know, really really well put together, 5/5, 10/5 for difficulty!

+.+ Holy crap, i wouldn't be able to do that. lol. I get to annoyed. Amazing work as usual. +.+

WoOp weldone hun, =]
i know it took you a while to write so yeh i think you have the right to be proud =] yaaaaaay!
5/5
~*~Jen~*~

It does seem that would be difficult. great job.

"Glitter dancing diamonds
Glitter dancing diamonds
Lightly soaring down
Lightly soaring down
Glitter diamonds soaring
Dancing lightly down"

I like thisa part because it rmeinds me of a poems my birth mom would read 2 me

BTW ur the only one who comments my poems

Sounds complicated but you did VERY well..nice job..again love the detail and the way you chose to present this.

Hey
I really really like this. it was such an enjoyable read. you have every right to me proud of yourself. i am giving you a little virtual pat on the back. well done.

kelly
xx

Wow, this poem was great!! i love your work!
Serenity

I don't know alot about the diffrent types of poetry! I love the snow! This was really Great! You have a real talent!

Impressive.....and visually charming......

This is so cute.. but yea in that one the line "i love you so muches more as i get to kno u" haha "muches" is myy word && nuttin else would fit there good lol =]

Its like a lullaby...i wonder when i'll be able to write like you but ur GREAT!

I reeally...like this style of poem..I might write this kind of style too. Thi spoem is amazing and breathtaking....you have a really good talent...
and thanks for commenting my poems...

Wow! This is an excellent poem......perfect to the form and beautiful too! If I could give more than a 5 you would have it.

This is the most complicated thing I've ever read. I can't even imagine how complicated it must've been to write this. I actually liked this, even if I did have to read it a couple of times. Lol. Keep writing! Take care.

`Liz