This one was your saddess i wish i could hug right now i have three
daughters and thier friends are like daughters to me too. i am a addict
and i still try to be the best dad i
can be. my one daughter" friend drinks and smokes pot and i have been trying to get her to stop. i started
her wrirring this site checkout her stuff
shes really good. she goes over nAME
jessica lynn she your age i "ll never
stop trying to get from messing up her life

THERES ALWAYS A DEEP PART IN EACH OF UR POEMS THAT HITS HOME OR THE HEART
In this one its < Why could'nd you see
you were'nt just losing me you lost what was
left of you> WOWWWWWWWW
BLEW ME AWAY KEEP WRITTING JESS U HAVE WHAT IT TAKES TO MAKE PEOPLE FEEL
GOOD SAD HAPPY U CAN WRITE IT ALL
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