This is a great poem. It is really sad that he died like that. I liked it just the same because it was full of filling and I could picture everything that was happening. 5/5

Oh my god. That was the sadst poem that i have ever read in my whole entire life. That was the best..5/5 great job and keep it up.{I almost cried

Oh god, i hope this is not your true story, but if it is ...
take it as part of this meaningless life. it is always something which keep us from enjoying the short life we live.
while this short life lasts we like to spend it with our loved once, but that s not destiny.
great write and it was so emotional, i almost cried.
keep it up and a 5/5 from me as you dont deserve anything less.

Beautiful poem, really a great job, the flow was great and the vocab wonderful! 5/5

Eck, mindy..
the poem was long, but it was worth reading.
it's like.. really really good.. and yes i know i need a better vocabulary =]

keep writing ; ily ;]

Wow so tıuching and great well done 5/5

This too is beautifully written!!! it flows so so well! It brought me to tears *wipes eyes again... and again...* great job!!

Forever*Yours

This poem is absolutely AMAZING!!!! i love it to death! 10/5

Wow Just wow, that was very nicely penned. Although it was very long, it was a very emotion peice, and really made me tear. The way you expressed this poem was very well done. Keep up the outstanding work.

Peace, Joe

I love this poem. its really well written. im a great fan of yours. keep up the great work

O..m...g... that was amazing. It was wonderfully written, with so much raw emotion.. made me cry.. beautiful flow and awesome choice of words, I can't even begin to describe how wonderful that was. I know what it's like to lose someone you love, it's awful, but you did a great job in relaying the emotions, wonderful write, 5/5
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This poem really really touched me. the emotion was there and real and oh god it made me feel so sad. I really did love it. The words used were great and the rhymeing was just wow. It was just so heartbreaking.. I hope this didnt happen and if it did i really do hope your allright. if you ever need to talk i am hear k? It was quite long yet i was engaged to read more and more, from the first couple of stanza's you yould of never of guessed the end. Keep writing and i hope your ok! xx

WOW!!! absolutely AMAZING! I loved the way it was written -- so originally. You kept me hooked. Great job!

DaddysLittlePrincess

Amazing i had tears in my eyes it was very beautiful and im sorry the loss that you had

Omg this was such a sad but beautiful poem im literally in tears!!
all ur poems are so excellent and one day i would love 2 be as gud as u!!!!!!
5/5
luv fallen

That was very touching and i loved the ryhme scheme.. is this true?