This is fantastic.I love the images that you use, unique and symbolic.And the emotion you capture!This is true poetry in motion.The last stanza is especially outstanding.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

This is absolutely beautiful . It captured such emotion and I loved the symbolism hat you used . I loved it from beginning to end . Wow . I don`t know what else I can say . Absolutely ah`mazingly done .
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Great poem like always, i like your word choice, they are not simple. great job once again. 5/5

Very good poem noni, 5/5!!! flowed great.

Wow, wonderfully penned. The flow and the structure where great. I was just starting to get into it then it ended, seemed to me like it stoped ubruptly, but maybe it's just me. Overall great write.

Peace, Joe

Beautifully Wriiten.
Such fantastic imagery that just captures the reader's attention straight from the start.
Great flow and excellent vocabulary. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I thought that it could have been a little more organized, but other then that it was good. *5/5*

Alyson

I really like the imagery in this one. Good job!

Beautiful poem, great flow, beautifully written... you are an exceptional writer. 5/5

You write with such eloquence and beauty. A depth of passion beyond your years.

Once again you have trapped me within the lines of your poetry and not released me until the end.

Great job
Jeannie

Really well written...
I like all the details