Oh wow, this was so sad...I have tears in my eyes...
The imagery you used in this was fantastic and the last stanza was so powerful...a wonderful write.

Oh my gosh.
The imagery was amazing, I was picturing this whole poem in my mind as I was reading it!
So sad too, you put quite a bit of emotions into this one. =[
The flow was PERFECT, so easy to read cause everything just smoothed together as I read it.
Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

When I read this poem, I felt like I was actually going through this apartament. I loved the imagery you have created, it painted such a lovely picture in my mind. The only think is the "realizing reality" line. It sounds redundant almost because realizing and reality come from the same root words. Other than that, wonderfully written. 5/5

Awww i like this...is this for your dad or something? 5/5

Awwwwwwwwwww. That's soo sad!
You keep writting girl. You have deep and such heartfelt emotions!
God Bless 5/5

~*tAy*~

This one was a bit sad and brings you to see that not everyone is happy. *5/5*

Alyson

Great job although the rhyming seemed forced in some of the stanza's, it stilled flowed well. this is a wonderful poem! 5/5

~Kristina

Hey ther girl! whoever leaves you a bad comment has sum serious problems coz that wos so bootiful=)
just about every girl experiences what youv gne thro in this poem, but just no that you will find tru happiness one day like i have=) xxchristinxx

Wow so amazing keep up the good work 5/5

This is SO sad, really, im crying right now, great job!! i love the imagery, it amazing!! i love this poem, ur an amazing writer!
5/5

Forever*Yours

Ahhh!....this is so sad!....the choice of words was superb,..And the last stanza was really powerful...Heart-felt write!
5/5
xxPoojaxx