Wow really cretive and great flow I love the rhythm of the poem suh a gret poem keep it up

Peace

Gene Ross

Wonderful poem. I would not make it through that. I love this poem too. 5/5

Bryan........long time i've never read ur poems and now u do a great job again, u really have a good talent and ur so very creative. nice to read again ur poems. great job so keep it u p!

its me lig

This is really beautifully this is for sure a 5/5

I love this poem!!! Your rhyming was beautiful. I can't choose which part i love the best. It's all amazing. You did a really great job on this one.

Excellent.

5/5

Creative en moving!Its rili beautiful! I love it! Keep up the gud work!Definitely one of my favourites!5/5 with no doubt!
Love,raven

This is really beautifull. your writings are wonderful. Without you here
I can't help but weep
so I sit here and pray
where you sleep.
This really hit home with me. I love your writing.

Nice poem, Bryan. The words you chose are very sweet and delicate, and the poem embodies a lot of emotion. Nice flow. 5/5--and thanks for your comments on my poetry yo!

Beautiful Bryan! I love it! Why can you only stay in the club for a week?! =[

♥ Ciao

Omg it's beautiful... i loved it really! it was perfect!! great job! 5/5

This is so beautiful and sweet.. another great poem.5/5

But where you sleep,
is where I pray.

its an excellent poem, i love it! i think you mastered the style 100%! oh, above i copied 2 verses, i put a comma at the end, i think it ads contrast, or sumthing, i'm not sure, but i personally like the comma there

Narc xxx

Amazing poem, I love the rhyming
I have put you in my favorites =)

thanks for you advise on my poem

Yet again truly amazing do u have any bad stuff lmao?????

Another perfect poem by the great poet, keep it up like always,

Excellent poem great ode 5/5

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like it its real sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~*kalene*~

I love this poem it is soo full of emotion and love wow soo good i am sure who ever this is for loves (ed) this poem wow this is awesome lol

also thx for the comment glad you liked it, my friend kinda inspired me to write it lol:)

keenan

Oh. thats just beautiful.. i love it! 5/5
<3 locamente enamorado <3

Because I like to take the time to really read and give good comment on poems and their authers, this will be my last comment for tonight.

This is excellent!
I don't often rate 5/5 simply because I think that everything can be inproved in some way, eventhought that doesn't mean I neccaserily have the answer on how to do so.
but... This poem defenatly deserves a 5/5!
The flow is great and it is very clear what needed to be said in this piece. you did a really great job in writing it!
the more I read your work, the more I like it!

thats it for now, I wish you a good night.
~*Natasha*~