Comments : 8:11 pm

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Very nice poem. I like the way you made it flow, its choppy, but it adds to the message conveyed through your words. Best wishes, and blessed be. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    I can really relate to this poem,i love it
    auna

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Wow i mean WOW"""""" This is so good. the pefect title to me, just me,
    would had been OUTKAST like i said
    thats me. don't do anything ur poem
    is the best. 5/.5 only because thats
    the highest i can rate on this site.
    Its starang how any member of the
    family can be that outcast. IM the
    dad of two teenage girls and because
    im a addict that makes the weakest
    link of the chain. Don;t get wrong
    i still do my daddy job and love it but
    it always goes back to outcast when
    ever i get into la la land as my wife and kids call it. so i hide in my room
    like a outcast. you get the point.
    thanks for the poem, its one i'll
    always read over and over.

  • 17 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    This poem is so amazing.. the way u put together these words and make them sound so realistic... it's so original.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I told i would read it over and over
    i relate to this poem so bad
    i wanted to writea poem just like
    this but i don't have to now. every
    word is me. Its a small world.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Again i got to say thanks. Thanks for putting the right words down.
    its like listening to a staind song.
    every word is me. how can two
    people who with diffent lives ,diffent
    ages have the same problem.Its a
    small world. i won't have to read this any more i have memorize it.
    thanks cy

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    Cy suggested i read this. he has very good taste in poetry. great job here. such a feeling of 'alone' in this poem. i am the black sheep in my family. always have been. i can relate so very well to this! 5 for you!

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Iread your quotes and they made me
    feel so bad for you. i wish i could
    find a way to snap you out of this
    state of mind you are trap in. I DO
    know this you have to find your way
    as do i . drugs are not working
    anymore, im sober right now and my
    daugter in the other room and i feel
    so ashame to be around her. Every
    time i open my mouth the wrong
    words come out. I JUST WANT TO HUG her and tell her how much i miss
    her while i still have a piece of my brain left. my wife i think has had
    enoght. i don;t mean to dump this
    on you i do it to warn you of the
    future. im in your future. a future of
    self hate , low self esteem, no self respect, im drowing in the same self
    pity pool ur in. reach for life befor
    its too late. I THINK if thiers a god
    and you take your life he makes you do it all over again until you get it
    right. so find a way, your way. Im
    looking every day at your page
    hopeing for that poem where every
    thing starting to get better. its in
    you i can read it in your poems its
    between the lines of ur poems
    I feel what you write so write some
    thing that can help us
    cy

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Don't forget my words. you only know
    the part of me i share. so i say again don't forget me if u find a way back.
    Back to a better time. A time where
    life had meaning. where i stool 10
    feet tall to my wife. where just making it through the night without
    drugs was'nt a struggle. BACK to a time where theses words would make
    no sence to me. DON'T FORGET

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Still reading this one. no one has come close to this poem and one
    called ALMOST by gracie danelle
    you two are tie at my favorite poets and poems check out her poem
    i know you'll like it
    cy

  • 17 years ago

    by panicked life

    Hey there, ADDICT recommended your poems to me. This is by far one of the best poems I have read just because I know what its like. I go through every day as an outcast and I relate to you. Way to go, Love it and hate it at the same time, a poem so great and a life so nasty.

  • 17 years ago

    by panicked life

    Hey there, ADDICT recommended your poems to me. This is by far one of the best poems I have read just because I know what its like. I go through every day as an outcast and I relate to you. Way to go, Love it and hate it at the same time, a poem so great and a life so nasty.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Im sending you a fan club.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Im reading it again its my favorite poem EVER. THE poem that comes
    close is a poem called ALMOST
    by gracie Danielle check it out
    i relate to her poem like i do this one
    but your poem will always be #1
    your fan cy gindle

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Im doing good i got 2 weeks coke
    free. its hell cause i crave it so badddd
    but im staying clean. I USE TO BE UP STAIRS ABOUT THIS TIME listening to
    the togeterness and fun downstairs
    but right now im playing scrabble
    with my family and im part of the
    laughter and fun. ITS cool being
    part of them and not a outcast
    I HOPE THIS MAKES YOU happy
    cause i really could'nt wait to share this with you cy

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Check out my new one

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I know this is going sound stupid but i feel bad feeling good without everybody doing good. cy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I for one definitely know a thing or two about being an outcast. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This poem is really good

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I never get tiered of reading this poem
    it will be my favorite piece foever
    thanks cy