Wow this is an amazing poem n it really shows truth-i no-keep writing cause u r awesome @ it

+.+ This is a really amazing poem, and it shows how this girl felt +.+

Wow. this is such an amazing poem. as i was reading it, i felt like that girl u wrote about was like me. u wrote this so well. i agree it does really show. great job. keep on writing. u have so so much talent. great poem
take care
luve angie

Awesome poem!! i loved it.. its breathtaking.. you're a really good writer.. keep it up! and thanks for the comment on my poem.. amazing job 5/5
-sda-

WOW! I have no idea what to say. That was amazing! You are so good! You have so much talent and it shows in every one of your poems. Keep it up!
Thank you for commenting!
Burning~Wings

This was such a naturally written poem - like a story, or a thought, completely unaltered. you made a terrible truth so beautiful. amazing poem.

Its amazing.
just wow...
no one could ever compare.
but thats only my opinion cause i can relate to it and its so real to me.
keep up that good work.
and stay strong.
xxx

WOW OMG I dont know what to say i love your writing more then i love mine

One of the best poems I've read!

This was an absoluetly amazing poem. it was brillant, i loved it. a great flow, very detailed and very expressive.

She got to weak and couldnt awaken
In her sleep, she was taken
God reached down and took her weak, fragile hand
As her lifes hourglass dropped its last grain of sand

of all, i would have to say those were my favorite lines. very pure, and worded so well. i really liked this piece. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.