Your best poem yet by far. totally awesome. definite 5/5

Your best poem yet by far. totally awesome. definite 5/5

This is so sad.. It made me want to cry.
Your words were so simple yet they conveyed so much..
I don't know what else to say.. such a bittersweet poem.
5/5
*Gem*

Excellent writing. I've been in your shoes ... and felt my husband waiting for me during a difficult time, only for it not to be.

Amazing...this is so sad! good job, it's really good
thank you for commenting on my poem

Aw that was really sad. very heartfelt piece. lot of emotion in it. thank u for the comment on my poem. meant alot. xx

This is really sad, i really like your poems 5/5 keep it up!

Aww this is such a sad poem but its really good, I like poems that are baseed on real life. And thank you for commenting on my poem. 5/5

This is very good....you're a really good writer...its soo sad though....but very good!! keep up the good work

This is really a great poem, i could feel the pain but i would also like to tell you...that he is there and watching you so if you are unhappy...he will also feel the pain..so rest is on you how you lead your life.

May God Bless You

Whether you were seeing things or not, it doesn't mean that he wasn't there, right? You've gotta show the world how strong you are. Even though he's gone, you're still here and you've gotta live your life to the fullest.

Great work. 5/5

Whether you were seeing things or not, it doesn't mean that he wasn't there, right? You've gotta show the world how strong you are. Even though he's gone, you're still here and you've gotta live your life to the fullest.

Great work. 5/5

Good writin gurl kp ^ da work leave sum comments on mine

It's a very sad and touching poem. You're an amazing writer. I hope you are okay.

Beautifully sad piece

Never feel alone becuz like u i losed someone special and wanted to go but in my own way take life as a gift becuz ur husband would have wnated to to be next to u no metter what.

I hope your ok. That was good
It made me cry!

Wow thats was very good!

One of your best, I think (And there are many)
I loved this, to me it came across as inspiring and hopeful because your loved one will wait for you on the other side.
But if he were still here, he would want you to live and bring hope to everyone you meet.
A beautiful piece.

Awww so strong, that image is very clear to see and the pain of him leaving again is very sore it reaches through the poem and stands out well.

it was not your time because people need you... you are needed here... an angel.... your poems will bring light and hope to others... thank you xxx