I think its good, well done, keep it up
.xx.

Yeah, lol thats cool. so japan huh? id like to go there sometime, it looks reli cool, and i looove the art and stuff. n e way thx 4 writing back!

Really cool poem, kind of short, but still good. 5/5

Ahh i kno wat u mean
my ex bf moved away and well im a minor to him so if he dates me he'd have to go to jail again!
so the only way to have contact with him
is well; now hes like my big brother! but it sucks

This is pretty good =) keep on writing!!!!