Haha! I loved this poem! The only problem I found was:

Where your not to blame, ... you're**

Other than that, I loved it!!! You are a great writer! Your rhymes were perfect and your vocab was amazing.

Excellent!

5/5

Thank you. Just thank you for writing poetry and sharing it. It's always top class and always a pleasure to read them

That was really different, Lisey. I loved it. It was really awesome. I haven't been writing much. =/ All this stuff, it's like AHHHHHHHHHHH! But anyways...
I lovce you.
Great work.
5/5

Another excellent poem!

"A parallel universe,
Where your not to blame," -- it should be 'you're', not 'your'. You did this again in the third stanza - I suggest changing that.

Overall, this was brilliant. I love the emotion you convey in your poems.

Another awesome poem.
you have so much talent.
keep writing.
love Tara-Kay