Cute poem i am glad u r coming back to it to make it longer great start. thanks for your comment on my poem "The Kiss From The Dark Angel"

Well so far so good, great job!!

Christmas really is the best time of year, sure you recieve a lot of gifts, but the real joy you get is giving and watching the ones you love smile. nice poem 5/5 I hope you add to it

Wow great start to a wonderful poem. Can't wait to see the rest. The flow was great, the structure was good, and the rhyming was good as well. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

I think that it is very good so far. Keep up the good work:) 5/5

Hmm. I loved it. :D I miss christmas, lots. The feelings of joy and happiness. oh boy oh boy. i miss it. i loved the poem, lots.

I really think you should finish it.. It feels very dead because it wasn't finish. Just a few more stanza would do.
Eh, because it didn't really actually end, I didn't like it, but that'd be unfair to vote on it like that, so when you finish, tell me and I"ll vote properly.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex No Rate

Hehe i love this poem and i LOVE christmas
xx

Even if it isn't finished...i love it
great job!
*~NearlyCrazy6~*

This put a smile on my face and made me feel really happy while I was reading this piece. Very interesting poem, inspirational in a way.
I think that you should finish that last stanza, because the beginning is truly great.
Keep up!

Aww very cute and just made me smile. I love the feeling I got from reading this. Well done *5/5*