Comments : You Have Problems

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem, it has great flow, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Lol. For some reason that made me laugh ''mamas boy'' ha. ANYWAY. that was a great poem. I loved it! Nice job, yet again!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Well i like the begening very interesting up to the end. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Well i think it's a great poem..5/5 keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    Wo excellent! You tell em' girl!

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    YOU GO GIRL! haha... Good poem. Isn't it the truth though?!?! I liked this one also cause you told it how it is!!! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great write by a great poet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    I think that the stanzas could have been a little more organized. *4/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    This was obviosly writen while u were a lil angry, haha. But anyways it is very understandable and i like the way in which it was writen. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    I like your poetry because you just tell it like it is. It's cool. I'm really impressed with everything I have read of yours! Keep these poems coming!

    Alesia

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    This poem reminded me of a judge show on tv. This girl kept calling this boy a mama's boy, and that's why she left him, eh.
    Good job, I liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Amazing. Mama's boy that was amusing. YOu did an excellent job again another well derserved 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was good, mama's boy got me, my partner is a mummy's boy and i tease him about it all the time, well you certianly got it figured that you do not want anything from this guy anymore. it was great. awesomely penned aswell

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    ' you tell him! i don't really nop what to make off it. but in a good way :]