I can't understand these words fully, but the whisper is always with me. The words belong to no one besides whomever reads them! I liked how you made the whisper silver in the middle. I thought it kind of dragged on and could be condensed and pore potent, but all in all i liked it. I think it would also be more beneficial to give more imagery. It seems a little bare for how long it is.. but it could really mean a multitude of things. I take it, one way, as the writer listening to the muse, almost struggling to come to some point.

Wow this is a short story really awesome, it flows so well so i enjoy reading it great imaginary and very creative mind,

Btw thanks for some critiques it helps me a lot, and thanks for the comments you gave

Wow. Intricate, a delicate and unique style. I like your word use, and i like the formation of your lines/sentences. Great write. Very cute.
5/5
~Stevie

This poem really makes you think. I think the words are asking me to dance with death. I have no idea! What do they say to you. The words belong to those who are losing their minds, they are dancing with fate now. You described everything really great. You did an awesome job on this.

Excellent.

5/5

Oh btw look back at the free comments post, I wrote something to you about your last post:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=69569

I believe these words, or how I relate to them as being, are words that I always find sitting beside me appearing without thinking of them or being aware of them, and hearing them through my without having to actually think about what is being written.

It did seem to drag on a bit but it was strong none-the-less. I could see the silver and hear the rustling and words. Can you trace them? Can you hear them, yourself?

Wow this poem really made me think.. I'm still trying to think what those words were are whom they belonged to. Great imagery in there, you could maybe even use more. But i loved it, it was something different. 5/5 :)