Wow what a deep poem! This is so sad yet something that needs to be told! Excellent job! This one had me in tears!

Sad. Terribly Sad, I hope it's not true because that would be horrible.
You had a great flow, perfect imagery, and your vocabulary was very good too! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow, what a really powerful poem. I can relate to this, it's really raw. Props on the flow. I'm sorry to hear about this kind of stories.

Beautifully expressed and well written...please keep writing and I will keep reading 5/5