That was really good! I really hope you don't hurt yourself though. I love you to death and I hate having you hurting. It's a really good poem though. Love you.

Love Always
~Casey J

Good job. The feelings really come through in your words. The flow was also good.

Powerful, emotional poem. Well written.

The "flow" was just a little broken, but I like broken. Good work. Strong feelings in this write.