My fantasies

by Mimi   Dec 16, 2006


Lost in a sea of poems and dreams

My storybook of fantasies

In a world where nothing's what it seems

And everything just aims to please.

Floating in Never Neverland

where everything is always grand

your wish is always the command

But never, at all, is it bland.

It's the only place that's right for me,

A perfect, giant fantasy.

It's a for sure guarantee

To be the best place anyone can be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey this was really good. i loved the words u sued to express urself. beautifully written.. thank u for the comment on my poem. meant alot xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Lost in a sea of poems and dreams
    My storybook of fantasies"

    Excellent opening! It really sets the scene for the rest of the poem and you had some beautiful language in this piece
    Excellent
    5/5
    *Gem*

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