I loved this poem! Wonderful work!!! It was beautiful! 5/5 all the way! Take care!

Much love!

I liked it, but there didn't seem to be a very good flow to it and it could have been a little more organized. *5/5*

Alyson

I liked it, but there didn't seem to be a very good flow to it and it could have been a little more organized. *5/5*

Alyson

Wow. powerful poem.

a lil error:

Bumped mE in the shoulder,
you had my.

5/5 anyhow.

I love this one... i would do anything for someone too... but he doesnt realize it.........

Great poem