I dont find anything in it. Dont get me wrong, its a good poem, but i dont find emotion but hey maybe its not my cup of tea? 4/5

Awwwh, I liked this very much.
I thought you put a lot of emotion in this, and it brought tears to my eyes.
A wonderful poem.

Flowed real nicely but you still managed to keep the emotion strong and real. i loved the last line the best "to loves harsh commands" thats realy good, brill poem, :)

Great poem! It brought tears to my eyes, too. Its really emotional!! 5/5

~Shae

Wow that was great. 5/5 keep it up.

Very sad poem.. it is brutal but i loved how you wrote each stanza of the note with to who it was to. it was very sad. emotional and still poetic. the only thing i can say is for you to watch your rhyming and line lengths. some of the rhymes seem forced which makes some of the lines were too short or long.

x3Lauren

This was good, put a lump in my throat... the only thing was, i wasn't so clear as to why she died, or why she killed herself i should say. this was a good poem though, very sad, nice job 5/5

Wow!!! this is so sad!! its really good. alot of emotion! i love it.

Ouch.

OH MY GOD!! i love this poem its amazing!! your so good at writting. it was a pleasure to read this. and your going on my favorites. i loved the ending it was sooooo strong.

keep it up because i plan on reading more!!

thanks for you work
-liz

Wow, amazing poem... a lot of emotion like most people have already said! good job, i loved it! =]

I love it.. soo sad.. but it was soo detailed on how each was loved.. and soo descriptive.. very well done.. good job.. and keep up the good work. and remember .. never stop writing cause you are talented and dont forget that.. keep it up .. 5/5

Great Poem...it couldn't have been better!!!