Aww that is really good and its full of a lot of meaning keep up the good work!!

Christmas isn't really about the gifts you recieve or the ones you give really. It's all about the people you love being with you, and these are the people that make christmas, not the gifts under the tree, the gift of love. excellent write 5/5

Aww. This is a great poem. I usually favor rhyming, but you pulled it out wonderfully without it. You did an awesome job. I loved this part:

Looking back it was all just a blur;
a memory in the back of my head.
It seemed like you weren't happy
or aroused by my childish smile.

Great Job!

5/5

Wow, just wow. This was very emotional, and very well written. I loved it. Great work by a great poet. Keep up the wonderful work.

Peace, Joe

I like your style,you did do a good job keep it up.

Wow.....Thats all that I can say. *5/5*

Alyson

Great poem. I really liked this one. Keep up the great work. Another 5/5

I have tried to make a poem about memory it never turned out good as this, good job!

Very sad poem. I can feel your pain in every word you have written. It is so sad how one person not in our lives can hurt so bad. Excellent job

This was really sad..
I can relate to this one.
I think you did a great job on this, the words were filled with so much emotion and the imagery, again, was fantastic.

Hey awesome poem,It was greatly written and it sounds like you put a lot of feeling into it. I could actually picture it. 5/5 Excellent poem.

Dis poem wuz real good well i like it..keep it up nd u had a powerful emotion in dis poem since u say ur christmas aint da way it wuz b4...great poem again 5/5.