Wow nice poem!

Excellent words!!
They really carried the poem well, setting the tone, describing whats happening and in such detail.
A brilliant dark poem!
I look forward to reading your mirrored refrain poem, let me know when you've done one =)
5/5
*Gem*

..."My fears are at heart
But I will defeat them
With my shadow by my side".... love it!! its beautifully written with so much hidden meaning!! thanx 4 letting me experience it! :P!! keep it up!

How well you have described Death.

My heart is racing, in overtime
A hand, as cold as ice is held out
I have the urge to grab hold of it
I reach with caution
It draws me in

Excellent. Wonderful imagery. dear.

Jeannie

This one is nice I like it. "My mind is free of dreams I stride forward,my heart is racing overtime." Great writting. 5/5.

Ty. Best of luck!

Ray