Comments : I'm Good Enough

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "When you walked into my heart
    something found an unknown life.
    When darkness seized my heart,
    you've fixed what was black and white"

    Gorgeous. Your words in this poem are beautiful, i especially loved that stanza, the images that you created in the mind were fantastic!
    Well done hun
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    You did a great job. You really pulled it off, this poem. Your rhyming was Amazing! and the beat of the poem when smooth. I really liked your 2nd, 3rd, and 4th stanza. Awesome vocab. Amazing wording. I loved it!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow another wonderfully written peice of poetry. Great Job!! I loved it. The flow and structrue were great as well as your rhymes. Keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    Nice poem again, normally I’m not into love poems but I will make an exception for this one. ;) Nice flow, rhyme and a good poem overall.
    Nothing can mend what you gave. Lovely sentence.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Wow I loved this poem it really touched my heart! keep em comin and I'll keep the rate of 5/5 comin your way! Your an amazing writer!

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    I like this! Well written and i can relate to it!
    I love reading poems i can relate to!
    xoxo-am

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    I love this poem! I think its really great too. Sounds so much like what happened to me... 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, i really love this poem,
    great meaning
    great flow
    great word chice
    and
    great style.

    congrates you have done a wonderful job, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxChelseaXx

    This is an AMAZING poem. When i was reading it, it made me think of my boyfriend and it really reminded me of him. Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    I love this poem, it really was a nice poem, and i know exactly what you're talking about. beautiful job, you really conveyed what you were trying to say well... great job, flow was great, vocab good, and it was heartfelt 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Loved this one, the ending was great, you are truely a talened poet. 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

  • Wow, great poem, awesome rhyming and flow... it was really enjoyable to read, and captured my attention to the last word 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    The wrods that you used where wonderfull, your truely talented, keep it up!!!! oxoxoxo :) choi!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lets Rock

    This is so beautifully written.

    Great indeed
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel

    This is really cute...and true in so many ways!

  • 17 years ago

    by monicaaelyse

    K normaly i'd think this is cheezy but somehow u pulled it off
    nis job
    byeziz

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh I enjoyed this, I thought it was really sweet and well written.
    I enjoyed the imagery you used.
    Ignore the downvoters, they obviously have nothing better to do.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxxBeenThereRockedThatxxX

    This poem was very well written...I can relate to it easily...good job! ^_^