This got a chuckle out of me.....I remember feeling this way before about another girl. haha. Great one!

Oh!!!! Its good, no i take that comment back, it is brilliant, absolute genius! I know someone who is EXACTLY like this. Most of the time i feel like hitting her with my keyboard. Excellent write i totally connected with it. (5/5 without a doubt, loved it) Amazing.

Kelly
xx

I think we all know someone we feel this way about....good job. Will she get a copy?

No one even likes you, stop lingering around..... It was great, all of it. Get em' girl! Take care of yours

So here comes the showdown
The end of the line
Cos I've had enough
Of you wasting my time ©
^^^
I love this last stanza Gem !
It's direct and straight to the point. No sugar coating.
It flowed perfectly and had an 'in your face' like it or lump it attitude.

A great read Gem, as always.
Take care dear one

Hey hun a very powerful poem. xx

Well dne very gd poem it makes it betta that every girl prob no a irl like dat lol. really gd i like the way u write .Mazie x.

(and soz if it snded like i was having a dig about make-up mask. i did really like it)

Hey!!! nice!! lost of emotion!! love it! i no someone like that... exactly how i feel!! how did u no?? lol! well done! :P

And here i am thinking that you're sweet and inocent lol i'll stay on the good side of you madam :))
Excellent poem makes me want to have a go at her to lol so the emotions definetly came thru :)))

"I'll look you in the eye
And I won't even blink
I've been waiting so long
To tell you what I think"

Such strong words! I feel like this about one girl..*grr* Anyways, I love this poem!
xoxo

P.S. I know, it wasn't a love poem!

I love it
"Here comes the showdown
Between you and me
I'm not backing down
I'm not going to flee"

My favourite stanza! awesome poem x

Gem.... cool. sounds familiar

Hate is a very strong word, dont waste it on people like the one concerned here.....they are not worth such precious things of urs... :o))

great write
all the best and take care

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