Another great poem here, thank you for sharing ur great talent. keep up the great work like always. 5/5 from me.

That was really sweet and sad too. The holidays can get depressing at times. Keep em coming

This is a beautiful poem. Christmas is a hard tiime for many people. This helps to know they are in heaven watching and their love lives on in our hearts. Wonderful job!

This is really good, I liked the flow of it and the last stanza was great. 5/5

That like totally moved me. im about to tear. i loved that. its beautiful!

Oh wow..
The last stanza brought tears to my eyes.
I really enjoyed this, it was beautifully written and filled with emotion.
I loved the imagery used, it was fantastic.
A wonderful piece.

AMAZING! keep it up~

**Megan**

AWE!! i love the poem Its great! Keeep it up

Oh. Joe, I hope this isn't for who I think it is??! This is so sad...it made me sad. The day after Christmas is gonna be exactly ONE month that I lost my granma. And yeah. This is just sad. It made me think of her. I've never had a Christmas without her...and I'm not even looking forward this Christmas tomorrow. Anyways, my bad for babbling...Lol. This was an excellent, heartfelt poem. Keep writing. And stay strong! God bless...

`Poetess

Hey,
pretty nice poem,i like it.u definetly deserve a 5/5

Nice, Italian. Remember me? It's tina. read my poems and let me know what u think... thx!

Hey! Merry Christmas

Excellent, you put such a good flow to it. Your poetry it touchy, and you can go far with it. Never give up.
---Ashley

Beautifully penned poem.

That was such a good poem! It was so sad and I loved the story line.

AHH this is way too sad.. very clever.. i like this a lot...a very enjoyable read.. my only suggestion is to unrhyme the first stanza because its not a rhyming poem.. however.. the first stanza is so it gives the impression that the rest will be as well.. still a realy great poem i liked it a lot

I loved the flow of that poem, I especially liked th topic of your poem. 5/5 x 5

Very sad but beautiful....

~*Alex*~

Ok so i cryed, it sounds like you were writting about my grandma that just passed, a great poem, very touching write,
nessa

Beautiful emotional tribute.
I sometimes feel uncomfortable about thinking of family members during the christmas period. It just reminds you so hard that they are just not there anymore to share the laughter and joys that christmas brings.
Sorry i just had to drag about a thought this write gave me.
Excellent poem, i truely loved this one as well.
The sadness just drips of it, beautiful.

5/5

xo angelique