Wow, thts really good. i really love how u wrote it!!
*Shawte*

Wow this is an aswoem poem i really love the style of the poem great job :)

I luv ur style...well done!

W-O-W!

excellent! nice flow.

A very deep piece that is full of emotion. Images and feelings spring into being when your words are read. I particularly liked these lines

Doors slam
Chains rattle
Held hostage
Losing the battle

Thank you so much for the comment. It is pleasing to know there are fellow poets near my age who are very good with words. Best wishes and blessed be. *5/5

Wow.. that is an awesome poem.. I'm like speechless.. it was so full of such sad emotion, and I love the choice of words..the flow was great. I loved this stanza:

Days are dim
Life is cold
Horrifying stories
Left untold

That spoke to me, it was wonderful. Thank you for the comment on my poem, it means a lot that you liked it!! 5/5!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

Wow very deep and compelling keep it up youll be a star!!!!