Comments : Missing You My Friend

  • 14 years ago

    by mazie

    I love the way u write u can really feel your emotios and u r very lucky to have a gd friend like that and i sure she lucky 2 have u 2. neway well dne it's very beautiful 5/5. Mazie X

  • 14 years ago

    by debbylyn

    This is really beautiful. I have some wonderful friends both female and male that I feel this way about. You did an excellent job of expressing the essence of a true friend. Good flow and rhyme...I enjoyed it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    This poem on friendship Is one of the best I have read! Friendships like these are rare. Excellent job on this.

  • 14 years ago

    by e l flo

    Niiiceeee job. so beautiful. i can totally feel what you felt.

    Erin :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem, 5/5!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Liz

    "Miss the long talks about nothing but life
    From happiness to hurt, stability to strife
    The upsetting look when I have to leave
    Really, I miss you when you're not next to me.

    You're my best friend, and if it's more than great
    But I'm happy you're here, for my hearts sake
    I need someone to talk to who makes things okay
    You do that for me, and I hope I do the same."
    ____

    ^^ Loved those lines.
    I just absolutely love this poem!! I can't even describe how much. I can relate to this in so many ways! This really hit home. I loved it!! Never stop writing! God Bless

    -` Poetess

  • 14 years ago

    by TaNyabAbEE

    Your poems are so awesome!! i love all of them!! keep writing, cuz you're amazing!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Artistic Fallen Angel

    You write your emotions about your friend so well this poem made me tear up a little anyway friends are special to me too. keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Awehh what a cute friendship poem, this one really left me thinking. So often the words we leave unsaid are the ones that pain us most and so often the thoughts we push behind are the ones who will come back to haunt us. Lol, sorry..this poem really got me thinking deep lol, great job.

    5.5
    :]