Wow dude, that was some deep stuff....i liked it, i liked it alot
5.5 from me!

Wow, Just wow. You are an excellent writter, I enjoyed this very much. Your wording and the way you used it was great. The flow and the structure was good. Great Job!!! Keep up the amazing work.

Peace, Joe

Wow Jason another amazing piece!!!!! Its really deeo though like a lot of your pieces, but that's what I like!!!!!!!

Laura

Good poem.. sad... but good

That is amazing
you should really keep it up!

Deep i really enjoy ur style, ur a godo writer keep it up bud ttyl

lissa

U r just a fabulous and a totaly amazing writet.i i wish you the best in life.Love from kate

I luv this poem.,... its full of emotion an i like it... dnt 4get im ya frend.... luv ya lotz...

naomi