I luved this 1, keep writing!
XOXO Freddie!

Thaaaanx hun! =)

I loved it!!! especailly this part which is my fav!!!>>He promised me that he will forever love me He promised me that he will never hurt me He promised me that we will forever be He promise me that his wife Ill soon be He assured me that a promise he never broke But he did, it first began when he again started to smoke........loved it soooooooo much!!!^_^ keep them coming!! and btw i hate that guy from the bottom of my heart !!! really i do!!

LOOOOOL!!! thaaaaanx alot for the comment hun bun!! =D