Hey
I really like this poem. You are so talented to be able to try different poetry styles. I love checking out your poems to see what you have added next. Another excellent piece.

Kelly
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Gem, Honey you know more at your age than I will know in my life..lol..These are really lovely

This style is soo cool! I loved it!
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Great job with this one hun i liked the style and the words chosen. good job xx

I enjoy your variety. Good job.

Love what you have achieved within the framework of this style. Excellent choice of words.

I hope this one was not for me......as somethimes this is what i feel abt myself.

Lovely piece or art here

all the best and take care

Congrats on winning the contest, this is a very good lanturne, 5/5!!!

You know whenever I read a lanturne they only ever do one stanza but I was very impressed with the multiple lines. Great job! :)
~Midnight Sun

My very talented Kitten =)
I love you
Marcus

I havent seen anything in this style before it was an interesting way of writing such a true message :)
loved it
court xx

I really liked this poem, it made me smile. Keep it up! ;)