Wow, Hun. I Really Like This Poem. From Now On, I Wanna Be The One That Says "Hi" To The Girl I Never Have Before. Well Done. Really Made Me Thinkk. :]

Ohk woah! This poem like, it grabs the reader and like its so...i cant even explain it..its verrry sad, but soo emotionally powerful and touching. its a poem that certainetly gives you something to think about...like you never know whos hurting and may be needing your friendship..so i totally agree with Sarah ^^

Excellent write..5/5 easily.

Nice work. The title is great too. very original. work on the flow though, some parts were a little messed up. anyways good job. Thanks for the comment. Shanik

It was a great poem
So simple yet so meaningful.