Comments : So this is how love feels...

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Really, bad. not my best work. i actually hate it. no need to comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I dont think this is bad, maybe it's a little simple but u shouldn't hate it. i actually think the simplicity of it is effective b/c it seems like it was that simple u realised u loved someone, just keep workin on ur poems, if u need ne help/advice, i'm here!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the repetition of the last line of each stanza, it really got the point across of what love can be like.
    Excellent poem
    5/5
    *Gem*