Well written.. I like how you made the format of typing it, Really good job 5/5

This is by far one of the best poems I have read on this sight. I loved every bit of it and the story to it. You couldn't have done a btter job. For sure a 5/5, i'd even give you a 6/5.
You have a talent. I'm off to read your other poems.
If you have time, plz take a look at mine, i'd appreciate it.