Awww that poor gal (i hope it not u coz u cood do betta if it she). this is another gr8 poem u write beautifully i wish i cood write like u. u reli do have a talent. gr8 write. keep it up. 5/5 . Mazie.X

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--m--what does this poem suppose to mean?--sori but i couldn't get it

Such a sad situation..
I've been there and i know how much it hurts yet i know what it's like clinging to false hope...
You portrayed that side of love really well
Well done hun
5/5
*Gem*

Wow! I love this one!
The emotion is very strong and powerful!
5/5
xoxo-am

Another great write! Unfortunately I've seen this situation too often....unrequited love, the stuff poems are made of! I enjoyed it very much. 5/5

I've been here. The boy you're madly in love with couldn't hate you more. Oh yeah, I know what this feels like. The poem was great. Except the flow was a little off but other than that, it was lovely!
xoxo