I wrote some sad poems take a look

Awww very sweet poem simple and sweet :) I like it a lot :)

It was a good poem, good flow, emotion, and rhyming. Keep it up. :D 5/5

Absence makes the heart grow fonder.... Perfectly captured that essance here. Well written, nice show of emtions, well penned. good job 4/5

Another short and sweet poem. nice rhyming, i do wish it was longer though, 4/5.

Awhh, it made me smile xd! I like it. Short, simple, and to the point but good.

Oh the love in this poem is great! it is excellent and descrbes real true love.

i loved how you used the word darling too. so cute.

5/5 David

Very sweet and emotional. It could be a little longer, but it's still very beautiful. You should work a little bit more on its flow.

Nice love poem. I think I'd like to see some ryhmes in your poems, not that they have to rhyme, they all seem to be alike in that sense. Still 5/5

marcella

This poem is well written but it could be even more better. It isn't original and it could be longer. In your other poems you expressed emotions much better. 4/5

Short and sweet. 5/5 for th egood wordings and simple but effective flow. Good keep it up :)

Tc
Fsams

Im sure your darling misses you too. what a wonderfully written poem

This is an absolutely beautiful poem. The flow was perfect and the love in it is easy to see. I am sure he is missing you. 5/5

Kalee

This is an original poem but filled with such love...i enjoyed this poem...

"Your always in my mind!"

^^although in this line i think you should change "in" to "on" .. it would sound alot better.

overall great job.5/5

I miss my darling too :(
Great job
I love it
*~NearlyCrazy6~*