This is a very good poem RJ, great flow, i give it a 5/5!!! welcome to the site!!!

This poem touched me because I got involved with a girl who had a boyfriend, she was all gonna leave him for me and so on...you know the story, well then she got pregnant, and it turns out the bf is a fiance, and when she was seeing me she was trying to hook up with my friend, so now if the kids mine do i still be with her even though i know what type girl she is??? great poem

Well, well.. all your poems seem to lead to the same path.. same emotional conflict. They are all very good.. I have one to read though still. Good work with this one... I loved the heart. 4.6/5

Ok the flow was a bit choppy., try reading your poems outloud and seeing where they dont exactly .flow.

But overall great poem! i could feel the emotions and such.

the rhyming was also done well.

x33Lauren

Welcome to PnQ

You really have a way of expressing yourself in your poetry. Excellent job!

I like this one a lot. it just makes sense to me. Plus the wording is awesome. Like, it's how people actually talk. Enough said. My friends say that all the time. AWESOME POEM!!
-Parker

You sure u don't live in my neighborhood?...lol..j/p, or shall i say great minds thing alike.