This is wondeful! I can relate alot to the feelings in this one. Excellent job.

Hey hun there was alot of emotion behing this poem.. very deep poem. very touching n sad lines.. xx

That was pretty good. Nice vocab and flow. It had a great hook in the beginng. The last stanza was really cool because it stood out. Cool write.
~Faith-less

Wonderfully penned yaar. really impressive! one can relate to it!
5/5

luv

Wow, amazingly I know exactly where you come from and what you feel. I loved every part of this poem, I know mine don't compare to yours, but if you could, please read and comment mine.

Wow, that was amazing

I loved how your last line of each stanza was relatively the same. The flow was a little off, but other than that, it was wonderful. I liked your choice of words.

5/5

I agree with everyone else the way you ended each stanza was excellent! Another great write from you! 5/5

Another greatly written poem! I loved the way this ended. I loved the whole thing! =] keep writing!

`Poetess

Good poem, good choice of words and just the right amount of repetition! I like it alot, this is totally relatable but not to overboard in the sappy department.

Gosh thats so WOW!!!!
I love how you made every 2 lines of each stanza with the same scheme of rhyme!! I dunno how 2 say it but Probably you get meeh lol =P

that was soooo amazingly written, I love the expressions in this piece!
keep it up
NemO xxxxxxx

Wow...this poem is absolutely fantastic! I am literally breathless. You are an amazing talented poet, and this poem has passion in every line. I am very, very impressed. All I can say is fantastic and 5/5!

Beautifully penned.

This is an amazing poem. You can really write wonders. Keep up the great work, you can do amazing stuff with writing skills like that.
---Ashley

I absolutely adore this poem. it is excellent, it puts across so much emotion. i love it ur a gr8 writer. could u possibly read my poem, 'don't make my mistakes' it's true, plz read and comment on it if you have time. once again fantastic poem i love it.

I adore this poem, you did it very well.

Excellent