WOW.....This poem made me wanna cry. It's so sad, and knowing some children are going through this today. There's so much emotion in this poem. It's very deep. You done an awesome job. Keep them coming.
5/5

This was great!!!!!!!! if only i could make mine like your's

Holy mother! dang this was so very excellant!

Wow you are good...so good...i acctually dropped some tears while reading this poem...thank u

Oh wow what an amazing poem.. it is just so tragic... so sad beyond words. how did you get the inspiration to write about something like this? it brought tears to my eyes, especially the final line about the bear. it blew me away. read a few of your poems they're excellent. x

Wow... the last lines were amazing...ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! It's horrible to think this actually does happen. The last line really took my breath away. 5/5 hun!

Um. this poem is really moving. i'm glad that i came across it even though it'll be stuck in my head forever now. You're amazing and this was amazing. Keep up the good work.

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Much love,
Jordan

Heyy this poem was very well written, and from one poet to another the ending is what draws people in and makes them want to read a poem over and over and your ending was very very good, I appreciate the time you took to comment on my poems as well! :)